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This story is mostly a work of fiction, but began with an autobiographical diary filled with fantasies and wishes during my sixteenth year. My own real life at the time was not similar to the character's story. 

It runs a total of about 333,000 words. The chapter tracking is on the Circle Contents page. All chapters generally run between five and ten thousand words, with a few exceptions. It has 33 chapters, a prologue, and an epilog, as well as a forward, an afterword, and an appendix with images and other information that some might find makes the story more engrossing. 

The Forward is two part; the first is myself speaking about the peculiarities of The Circle, I hope making it a bit easier to read, and the second, a few words from "Alex" with which to confuse you.

The Prologue is just that, a prolog; an introduction and scene setting chapter. It has no real action, no character interactions, no dialog, and consists mostly of narration and a little internal dialog from the main character. The main character makes an appearance, you meet him, and learn a bit about him and his life and situation through a few of his thoughts and a great deal of exposition by the older Alex. The supporting character's are introduced by him, and wrapped into his past and current life. I kept it as entertaining, useful, and brief as I could manage. The rest of the story is perfectly readable without the prologue, but I hope it adds a sense of a pre-existing relationship with the main character and his situation as it unfolds over the length of the story.

 Chapter One is a flashback, as are many of the odd numbered chapters at first. There are other flashback chapters later on as well. They are fairly apparent at first, but may sneak up on you later. 

There is a great deal of sexual activity rather graphically depicted between males ranging from 14 to 20. If this isn't your cup of tea, do not read the X-rated chapters.  There are two versions of many chapters: One will be rated R or less, and a second X-rated version. If you prefer a less sex-filled story, don't read the X-rated chapters, they are explicit. You can find out more about the ratings here. The story without reading any of the X-rated chapters is rated-R.

There are no storyline, plot or content differences between the X and non-X-rated chapters. By reading one version or the other, you will not miss or learn anything not in the other versions. The only differences are the sex scenes. Some side stories develop and entangle within the X-rated versions, and they are mentioned only in the other X-rated versions. You will neither gain nor lose by reading either version. Reading both versions is completely insane and a waste of time, but since some obviously have, thanks for the comments and corrections. 

Please do not link to any Circle pages other than this one. Doing so voids my assurance that the reader has read the pertinent warnings, like the one below.

Warning:  The Circle is R-rated, although many chapters also have an X-rated version.  Those X-rated chapter versions are intended only for adult audiences who wish to read it, and wherein it is legal to do so at your age at your location in your circumstances.  This story is fictional and intended for entertainment only.  If you find homosexual activity between teen males ranging from 14 to 20 offensive or do not wish to read such material, or it is illegal for you to do so, do not read this story. The ages are based on real ages of individuals from the time period, and many of the events are partially or completely fictitious.  All names and locations or other identifying information have been removed or changed, and the participants, when applicable, have agreed to the story being published as is.  I retain all rights, titles and ownership to these works. Be aware, page names change often, so a direct link to any page but this index page may not work in future.  You may reproduce excerpts or chapters as long as you link here electronically or the URL is printed at the bottom of the hardcopy. You may share or disseminate complying excerpts or hardcopies. 



 

RATINGS

At the head of each story you will find a colored text with the rating and content codes.

 

     Rated: G   Contains:  safe, no warnings  

     Rated: PG    Contains:   sexual references, brief or near-nudity, mild violence and/or language    
Youth safe pretty much.  If you've found this site, you've read worse.

     Rated: R    Contains: sexual descriptions, nudity, rough language and/or violent content    
Teens not warned, youths warned, particularly where it may be illegal for you, though you've probably read worse.

     Rated X      Contains: mild sexual content and/or violence and/or extreme language    
Teens and youths prohibited, others asked to observe any pertinent laws or restrictions.

     Rated XX     Contains: sex, rough sex, extreme violence and language    
Teens and youths prohibited, others asked to observe any pertinent laws or restrictions.

     Rated XXX     Contains: mast, oral, anal, extreme sexual descriptions, rape, death or suicide themes    
Teens and youths prohibited, others asked to observe any pertinent laws or restrictions.

 

By bypassing any age or content restricted warnings, all responsibility lay with the reader for any and all reasons. I have done my best, and more than required, to assure that minors do not read material not suited for them, as well as to provide adequate warning to adults for material not suited for everyone.

 


 

On expressive emphasis.

So many writers use different ways of expressing louder or emphasized spoken words in dialog. Some use ALL CAPS while others use bold or italicized words to signify they were spoken louder or with more emphasis.

Myself, I prefer these methods:

A character emphasizing a word among others, and only saying it slightly louder or clearer will be in bold.
"There is no fucking way!" if someone wasn't yelling 'no', but only saying 'no' slightly more emphatically. 
"There is no fucking way!" would mean the entire sentence was said with strong emphasis, as in surprise or slight anger.
"There is no fucking way." may be a character's internal dialog or thoughts at giving up on a situation.

ALL CAPS are yelled words or phrases inside dialog. Usually spoken near top volume or over a lot of background sounds.
For instance, a character shouting at someone else in a loud night club as loudly as possible would be in all caps.  "WHAT?" 
"NO FUCKING WAY!" if someone yelled the words at full volume, as if in anger or very emphatically.

To mix the methods. . . .
"I said no, and I meant, NO!"
In this instance, the first 'no' was slightly emphasized, while the second 'no' was shouted, or nearly so.

There are rare cases where I will use both on the same words. This would signify a complete shouting at full volume in anger, hate or rage.

"I SAID TO FUCK OFF!" or "I said to FUCK OFF!" would be identical uses and meanings, or so nearly so that any difference would be moot.

 

I use ' ' to emphasize words in narration or third party narrative emphasis. 

 


Use of asterisks to denote scene changes

When a scene changes within a chapter, I will denote that with five asterisks with double-spaced line returns before and after, like so. . . 

 

*****

 

This will denote a major scene change. Often a space of time has been spanned as well. 


When a minor scene changes, or to delineate smaller changes of situation, often between continuing characters in the same location but at a time later, I will use three asterisks with single-spaced line returns before and after, like so. . . 

***

This replaces phrases such as "The next morning" or "Later that day" and is used for a fade-out/fade-in effect quite often in The Circle.



A FEW NOTES AND CONTACTS

Thanks to everyone who has written with such kinds words.  Thanks for the emails. 

I just wanted to include a few words to hopefully cut down on the wasted email time, on both ends. 

 

  • no I am not looking to hook up with anyone
  • no I do not want to share porn pics or vids
  • no I do not want to IM for a cyber session
  • yes your criticism of these stories is welcomed
  • yes your opinions of these stories are welcomed
  • yes I would like to know about other story sites on the internet
  • gaystories at smokr dot info for email
  • my views on ages and sexuality
  • my views on male beauty

 

 


 

Be nice and have fun.

Ray.

 

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Prologue
Chapter 1
Chapter 1x
Chapter 2
Chapter 3
Chapter 4
Chapter 5
Chapter 5x
Chapter 6
Chapter 7
Chapter 8
Chapter 9
Chapter 10
Chapter 10x
Chapter 11
Chapter 11x
Chapter 12
Chapter 13
Chapter 13x
Chapter 14
Chapter 15
Chapter 15x
Chapter 16
Chapter 16x
Chapter 17
Chapter 18
Chapter 19
Chapter 19x
Chapter 20
Chapter 21
Chapter 22
Chapter 23
Chapter 24
Chapter 25
Chapter 26
Chapter 27
Chapter 28
Chapter 29
Chapter 29x
Chapter 30
Chapter 31
Chapter 32
Chapter 33
Epilogue
Afterword
Appendix/Images
Acknowledgments
Guestbook & Forums
Rear Entry

 


All legal rights to these works are copyrighted and reserved by me, and all rights are reserved without prejudice. All works are fictional, though some are based on real events from my life, or events others have related and given their permissions for the story to be published as is. All names in any reality-based stories have been changed, as well as any identifying situations or locations. Any similarities to others, as well as any names used, would be purely coincidental and entirely unintentional. The materials on this site are for recreational and entertainment purposes. The author nor this site do not promote nor endorse any lifestyles, activities or actions, other than to live together in peace.

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